A Girl Betrayed (Or Something I've Written)

I have ten followers!! Woohoo! I am so excited because I never thought that I would be able to get any followers. You guys are the best. I was going to post about my experiences with make-up because I just started learning how to use it a little while ago (I'm eighteen...yeah, I know.), but I'm not really in the mood right now and it seems a little boring. Talk to me, girl readers. Would you like to read about my adventures in the make-up area? In celebration of the ten followers, I am going to post a short story that I wrote and that I talked about here . You can also read the summary of it on "My Works-in-Progress" page. It might be a little confusing as it sort of jumps into a scene without any background. So to get rid of confusion, the main character is late teens to early twenties and has a daughter. She had her daughter with a guy who betrayed her trust because of his loyalty to a certain liberal organization (that's as specific as I can get right no...